Final Draft Essay 1 Edited 
Sabra Johnson
English 1100
Essay #1 Final Draft
Dear Mrs. Johnson, Hello, I am your daughter, Sabra's, English teacher. I wanted to take the time to enlighten you about her class room behavior and how disrespectful she can get towards me. Don't get me wrong, Sabra is not always discourteous. She has her days where she can be a model student in class and in others she can be my worst nightmare. For the last couple of weeks, Sabra has been coming to class to sleep. When I address her to wake up, she would give me an attitude or curse at me. She says marching band is the blame for her sleeping in class. If marching band is getting in the way of her education, I believe she should reconsider her choice about being in the band. I have informed you in the past about her poor grade in my class. It's as if she doesn't try to attempt and make an effort to do the material I present to the class. I would appreciate it if you have a talk with your daughter about her classroom etiquette and how to appreciate teaching staff on a day to day basis. Thank you for taking the time out of your day to read my letter and take into consideration the concerns I have with your daughter. Sincerely, Mrs. Muller
Dear Mrs. Muller, Hello, I am Mrs. Johnson, Sabra Johnson's mother; I wanted to reply to the letter you sent me a couple of days ago. I am sorry about my daughter cursing you out in class these last couple of weeks. I guarantee you that I had a long discussion with her about her behavior and you shouldn't have any issues with her. As for marching band, my daughter will not be resigning her position as Co-Captain and member of the Marching Blue Devils. Sabra has put in too much hard work and time to quit the color guard now.
English 1100
Essay #1 Final Draft
Dear Mrs. Johnson, Hello, I am your daughter, Sabra's, English teacher. I wanted to take the time to enlighten you about her class room behavior and how disrespectful she can get towards me. Don't get me wrong, Sabra is not always discourteous. She has her days where she can be a model student in class and in others she can be my worst nightmare. For the last couple of weeks, Sabra has been coming to class to sleep. When I address her to wake up, she would give me an attitude or curse at me. She says marching band is the blame for her sleeping in class. If marching band is getting in the way of her education, I believe she should reconsider her choice about being in the band. I have informed you in the past about her poor grade in my class. It's as if she doesn't try to attempt and make an effort to do the material I present to the class. I would appreciate it if you have a talk with your daughter about her classroom etiquette and how to appreciate teaching staff on a day to day basis. Thank you for taking the time out of your day to read my letter and take into consideration the concerns I have with your daughter. Sincerely, Mrs. Muller
Dear Mrs. Muller, Hello, I am Mrs. Johnson, Sabra Johnson's mother; I wanted to reply to the letter you sent me a couple of days ago. I am sorry about my daughter cursing you out in class these last couple of weeks. I guarantee you that I had a long discussion with her about her behavior and you shouldn't have any issues with her. As for marching band, my daughter will not be resigning her position as Co-Captain and member of the Marching Blue Devils. Sabra has put in too much hard work and time to quit the color guard now.